Writer in Residence · 12/20/2010

The Final Room

THE REMIX:

THE FINAL ROOM

A CITY

“our nights until she was gone, my mother never—”

A city of flatbed trucks brimming with the skins and skulls of alligators, with the black and green and brown figures of leather and flies. A city of flat-bed trucks rusted and a city of speakers, towered and humming. A city of windows punched out and fire escapes rusted, a city of smeared and inarticulate graffiti and of buildings boarded over with long ago rotten planks, a city whose proudest buildings are those we would call burned out husks; a city of speakers towered and swaying like trees in a tempest; a city once of tickertape and confetti. A city once of wide avenues filled with families smiling, little boys on their father’s shoulders, while mother quiet in her flowered hat.

A portrait of a woman on his night stand, an etching of hues pink and brown. A voice beneath all static, “Where are you, in the memories of mother, where are you long off in the voice of bears, of tigers, of lions, of dogs in ruffles?”

After the funeral, this letter in a child’s hand, this letter immersed in the stray stories of those long dead, the remembrances of mothers and grandmothers, gone to dust. Ah, if I could but once smell the smell of popcorn, cotton candy—Ah, Pierrot, long silent when they found him covered in sticks and leaves, the dried blood and the flies.

Ah, the remembrance and how those days have faded. Always a funeral with clowns, always a clown show with mutes in white face and polka dots, with men banished beneath the ruffles and the soundless gestures of mimes. And everywhere the wild buzz of horse flies, ascending.

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PIERROT (1)

And Pierrot articulated with his hands, bare and torn, “But I have.”

And Pierrot gestured that he already had and the man asked, “Was it beautiful?

And Pierrot gestured these animals and he gestured the tigers, the brown bears and basset hounds, pink skirted and leaping through blazing hoops.

And Pierrot showed the man the knowledge held within his gestures, and the man said, “Do this—” and so Pierrot articulated a world so long unseen, his eyes, the shadows of the wall and the static within the air, and this man, the last man, gone and forever lost now within the forest of Pierrot’s gestures, lost within the minds of a mime. And the air curled into his words: And the air spoke with vibrations: And the man asked, “When will you? and the man said, “Show me.”

Animals fed on bloody steaks and animals trained with whips.

Before the letter, this funeral. Did you stack yourselves a hundred high? Dust—
Dust, flaked plaster, shed skin, rat droppings. Flatbed trucks overstuffed with the carcasses of alligators shot through the back of the heads or brimmed with those skins of what were once alligators, now the figments of shoes and boots and briefcases and the homes of rats and the nests of birds.

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FOR SO LONG NOW

For so long now no animals but what animals Pierrot crafted from the shadows, lions and hounds gnashing and dancing on walls. For so long now no big top overhead but the sky, the plaster ceiling, the pipes and cobwebs. For so long Pierrot, gesturing only to Pierrot, who mirrored his gestures in return. For so long,

Pierrot yet something less than Pierrot.

“For those men out there, these men who toil and pave and build our city.”

From our balcony I would imagine—from our balcony I would wait—gr—

He gestured the lashing of whips, those languages eternal.

Her lips as if blossoms. Her petal’d hair.

His wheeze as he felt the last of this crumbling membrane, “Oh,” he said, “I was… she was alive yet—”

His yellow beard and sunken eyes.

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HOW

How brown bears stood on the threshold of the forest, sneering on hind legs, yellowed teeth and fur sheen’d as if silver beneath the opened membrane of the night. How he hurried on tip toes to the howling of bears within the forest, the faded crackle of deadened fires at his ruffled back. How he slept in meadows under the open membrane of the night while over him stooped the silent apparitions of a hundred dead brothers, those bloodshot eyes and glistening cavities of Pierrots, how they gestured the funerals they never had, the languages they never spoke, the animals they long ago knew and trained and fought and died beneath and were digested within.

How he staggered along highways and dirt roads, lost beneath the yellowed membrane, lost in the silence of his gestures, of his wheezing.

How he staggered along until the roads sweltered with the buzz and hum of speakers situated in trees, arranged on poles along concrete roads; how he yearned to know the clucking of hens and the mooing of cows.

How mother saw—

How Pierrot dashed, dusted and bloodied, across the tilled and silent earth of ravaged cornfields.

How Pierrot juggled bowling pins and cue balls and mimed a thousand spectacles along these avenues, gone to dust and busted brick, gone to broken wine bottles and rusted trucks—

How Pierrot passed along these trucks, and how he did not attempt to train the long-ago-monsters within, the bleached white jawbones, the teeth long and glinting as if Bowie knives.

How Pierrot threw the half skulls of finches through hoops. How Pierrot whipped and punished a rotten branch he insisted was a rib.

How she said—how she said the sky opened—

How the city of speakers vibrated with his words and how the streets and alleyways hummed with their meaning.

How the man saw them alive and snarling in the shadows of the walls and how Pierrot expanded these into the recollections of mother in her flowered hat, into the little boy upon his father’s shoulders, the showering of confetti, the pomp of the brass band, the twirling of batons—. How the streets trembled against the march of elephants—how these bears clubbed him with paws and how Pierrot spoke aloud.

How these bears opened his throat, his stomach, and the noises Pierrot made.

How these Pierrots were never seen again. How they fell into yellowed dust as
Pierrot placed the scraps unto the man. How those nights smelled of the hoops they burned and the fur they scorched. How those Pierrots faded into the clots and clouds of dirt.

I see you in my nights.

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LONG DAYS/LONG NIGHTS

In my days that are ever nights, with your smiles, your lips, the animals you—

In the hum of flies recall now those tigers and elephants, last seen within the mind of Pierrot, last seen on tin types and daguerreotypes. Into the city now, a city deteriorated into bricks and dust and shards of glass. Into those houses not collapsed, the cobwebbed bedrooms of children long ago grown and died, the dens where the jackets and the leather bound volumes and pipes of fathers lay covered in dust.

Long days along the roads and no animals but those found mounded and fly-swaddled, those does and dogs tossed and sweltering in ravines and ditches.

Long days and Pierrot, hunched and digging in the dust of fields for bones, sparrow
bones, gopher bones, skulls or femurs—. Long days and Pierrots dust masked and dwindled to a half dozen.

Long days and their numbers dwindling in the nights.

Long days now hurtling along, lost in the vibrations of gestures, lost within the vibration of minds. Long days of polka dotted search parties edging the forests, the mounds of sticks and leaves just across the threshold, white gloves smeared with red, the buzzing of flies. Long days Pierrot spent shooing flies with white gloved hands, lifting and dropping limp limbs and paws. Long days spent cradling skulls, rocking back and forth heaps of ragged meat and fur, long nights moaning and weeping and gnashing.

Long days tangled in the station wagon, legs and heads flopped from windows, the back window kicked out and exploded into dust for the bulges and ruffles of a hundred Pierrots, their long red shoes and polka dots. Long days training the un-trainable, tossing decayed coyotes underhand through blazing hoops, whipping and chastising does, beetle fat and bulged on the road.

Long nights around campfires and the gestures of Pierrot to Pierrot, the language of soundless articulations, of words born of cotton glove and shadows thrown across a clearing, of fingers deformed into brown bears. Long nights now camped in clearings, long nights recollecting the company of animals, the snores and howling of brown bears and basset hounds, caged and shackled, leashed and sedated. Long nights of Pierrot laughing soundlessly, of Pierrot flickering in the shadows, the turmoil of the fires.

Long nights of Pierrot locked inside invisible boxes, trapped and wailing soundlessly, of Pierrot suspended from invisible trees by invisible ropes, of Pierrot ascending stairs and descending stairs, of Pierrot gesturing the gristly aftermath of a death by Russian Roulette. Long nights on the road and into the ravines, wondering wordlessly how far they had traveled and where they were going, wondering and forgetting and consulting again the map, although they now traveled those forests beyond the forests on maps, the forests inferred alone by the absence of lines and words.

Lost—

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LOST

Lost and yet how the vibrations of a long ago voice pulled him along.

Lost now and wandering into the fallen-apart doors of apartment buildings and malt shops, the bones of rats in the moss’d and torn stools. Lost now until this bedroom—lost now within a city of dense and white sound, crackling and humming.

Mother—

mother—

No animals now but those of bleached bones.

No more forests but the yellow glow of the swamps.

No more moaning life but the croaking and hissing of an alien species.

No more the glow of the firelight, the glistening firmament of the opened sky.

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NOW

Now—

Now from Pierrot’s pocket the last shreds and tatters of the letter.

Now long nights around campfires, long nights in the shadows of flames and against the heat of flames, white face paint dripping from chins and lips, beaded on noses. Now no howling but the howling behind his eyes.

Now this gaggle of Pierrots emerged from a single station wagon, pink tongues extended and lace collars pulled, a hundredfold human luggage untangled onto the final lawn, where they milled and mulled like philosophers the gravity of a world so easily fled and where jugglers plucked and tossed femurs and jaw bones from the loose soil.

Now those forests where mounds of bones lay bleached, within the ink juts of pines, the echoed moans and yowls of mountain lions and cougars, brown bears and black bears, and how their shadows and sounds expanded and deformed within Pierrot’s mind.

Now, long days along the roads, back roads and highways, roads of dust and concrete, roads bent and vibrating in the heat and the letter taped to the windshield, a membrane browning in the sun. Now, long nights amidst the black juts of vacant forests and no animals but the animals of Pierrot’s minds. Now, one Pierrot and he continued in the station wagon until the station wagon collapsed into rust and coagulated oil. Now, the only illume from the yellow eyes of alligators, the ghost wane of gases and thereafter, the last sounds of Pierrots echoed throughout the valleys.

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PIERROT (2)

—of dust—

oh, how I’ve dreamed—

One Pierrot and he continued on foot, his boots worn through and his belly caved in for hunger, until he boiled his boots, nibbled the limp leather and drank the brown brine.

our—

—our animals and how we have trained them.

our grandmothers—

our mothers—

Pierrot—

Pierrot—

Pierrot—

Pierrot—

Pierrot—

Pierrot lost along corridors and within the shadows and water smears of wilted walls.

Pierrot, lost now and napping on dusted davenports and Pierrot lost and expanding shadowed puppets against the water stained wallpapers and those wallpapers bulged with the husks of beetles and mice.

Recall now those parades through the heart of small towns, ticker tape and Main Street crowded with families, applauding, whistling, and boys on fathers’ shoulders, mother and her flowered hat. Recall those towns last known within the shallows of Pierrot’s mind, those towns lost long ago. Ruffles and polka dots. She sat before me, and she said, “So much dust—”

Soon, all gathered and leaned and, below, under his pine timber and dirt, lay Pierrot, the man, lay Pierrot, something less than man, and as the soil settled, these honks into handkerchiefs, these painted-on tears and these true tears, bleeding.

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THE ANNOUNCEMENT

Speakers along the road issuing the language of static, and now, a voice deep and lost and taut and frayed.

Speakers spilled open and speakers humming an eternal language of white static—speakers worn and spitting dead wires and wires sparking. Spoken by speakers propped on low lying sandstone and speakers covered with the vacant nests of birds and speakers where chameleons lay sunning;

The brilliance.

the dead—

The exploits of Pierrot, long ago under the big top, the lashing of Pierrot’s whip and “the animals you thrilled us with.” The gesture Pierrot never forgot. The lights, your music—the man laughed, he wept, “How did you see, how have you known—”

The rain of tickertape—the rotted laces swirled and swallowed as if the finest spaghetti.

—the skins of your big top—

The warmth of animals.

The whipping gestures Pierrot made in the listening as he squirmed and writhed, the hoops he doused with lighter fluid and the blue flames that gleamed in his wide exhilarated eyes.

Thereafter, days wandering from forest to forest without thought.

Thereafter, hours spent in the dumb show of their grieving, mulling and chin stroking.

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THIS ROOM

These days hurtling along roads in an endless gesture, the only gesture Pierrot once knew. These streets haunted alone by the apparitions within Pierrot’s mind.

They, into the ragged forests of the swamps, the rank and dying vegetation they wandered.

This bedroom that rocks against strong winds, this bedroom with windows bricked over.

This man and the microphone he clasped and spoke into these centuries: This room of a man and his wool blanket covered by the vestments of time: This room of a man skeletal and attached to respirators. This room of humming and voices.

This room of respirators and radios towered and blipping and hissing. This room of shadows and ammonia.

Those half consumed and mashed.

Those towns found only beneath skins of dust and within canisters, newsreels and microfilm spools. To understand and train the emaciated and ancient faces of goats.

Training the remains of field mice and birch trees shaped as bones.

Under the pitch atmosphere and how Pierrot crept into the forest with a frying pan and a potato sack, the snores of Pierrots whistling in his wake. “Were there elephants and lions?” “Where are you with your white strong eyes—”

your animals—

your hoops and the—

your joy—

your songs—

your wide—

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Remixer’s process: My process for this version was to alphabetize every sentence in the story (for these purposes, I considered colons, semi-colons, and em dashes to be sentence breaks, along with periods). Aside from the rather arbitrary decision to alphabetize the sentences, I restricted my job as a writer to creating paragraph breaks, section breaks, and changing some punctuation. The resulting piece works pretty nicely, I think: there’s a really interesting sort of rhetorical build that happens in those sections with repeated beginnings (the series of sentences beginning with “And Pierrot,” for example). It was also kind of a lucky break for me that the program I used to alphabetize these sentences recognizes quotation marks as a “letter” coming before A (which accounts for the, to my mind quite evocative, “our nights until she was gone, my mother never—” at the piece’s beginning).

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James Tadd Adcox is the editor of Artifice Magazine. He is currently dressed in a black hoodie, a dress shirt, dress pants, and some shoes that were once nice but are now starting to come apart. His work has appeared in Barrelhouse, Requited, The Literary Journal, and Lamination Colony. He lives in Chicago.

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posted by Robert Kloss